Tuesday, April 05, 2005

Ra, the Egyptian sun God

Part one
The absolute smugness of taking an overnight train ride. Looking out a window that whistles its way out of a city, out what you called home.
Through nameless, numberless hamlets, children standing close to the railway tracks, staring on.
One instant your eyes meet.You are a part of an anonymous, slightly yellow eyed, green frocked, pony tailed life for one microscopic moment.
Green fields, black soil, palm trees, farmers in their spotless white in an intriguing chat, as the sun quietly slips down in a glorious crimson last bow. Tomorrow is another day.
Crowded city with a lust for everything. Life. Money. People. Lights. Food.
You arrive. Something on cartoon network is playing in your mind. Yeah, sheep in the big city. Smiling inwardly, you walk through a muggy night in Mumbai.
Between bites of vada paav and memorising the local train schedule, the sun decides to set again, the pretty blue ocean creating a sand pattern on your soles.
A woman behind you screams an obscenity in Marathi.
Life may not always play fair. But atleast it has got a helluva good sense of humour.

Ra, part two
And so you have it finally. The sea. The sun has set in front of my eyes, down an indigo skyline with the sea wafting a tune that my skin finds familiar.
All that is left is the hint of splashes of pink crimson on a dark background.
Walking down a path of saltiness touching fine sand, looking back at footprints that get washed away. Leaving behind but a memory.
Like the smell of a familiar perfume that catches you unawares one busy day, making you smile.
Children play. People mill. Some jog. Some stare.
A few distant stars peep down.
As you then walk down this line, are you getting one step closer to home? Will you reach the distant orange lights you eye?
Or will the final climax come just like this one day. Catching you unawares, when your eyes are moist.
Will you continue to tread all over the west coast looking for that one singular moment, missing it by but a few baby steps?
Or as you pick pieces of yourself, also look for nails for your coffin?

7 Comments:

At Tuesday, 05 April, 2005, Blogger gulnaz said...

so good to see u back, i even sent u an email yesterday asking u to post but i don't think it went thru. reminds me of bby, there was an old parsi gent praying to the setting sun, so many snapshots come to mind with this post.

 
At Wednesday, 06 April, 2005, Blogger {illyria} said...

that was truly masterful writing! so glad to have you back.

 
At Thursday, 07 April, 2005, Blogger Akruti said...

"welcome back" and lovely description there:) all colours mixed into words and a rare rainbow of thoughts,:)

 
At Thursday, 07 April, 2005, Anonymous Anonymous said...

You are a part of an anonymous, slightly yellow eyed, green frocked, pony tailed life for one microscopic moment.

this line... it clutches, paws at my chest.

*sigh*

 
At Thursday, 07 April, 2005, Blogger small squirrel said...

glad you are back, prat. have missed the way you weave your words.

and now you've included a train ride... one of my true loves... thank you...

 
At Sunday, 10 April, 2005, Blogger Ubermensch said...

if someone told me that i wrote this, i wud believe it...felt totally at home with the usage and the economy..sigh..

 
At Sunday, 17 April, 2005, Blogger . : A : . said...

Pristine and melancholic. Each word hangs on and lingers as you take us through this journey. Thanks!

 

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