Saturday, February 25, 2006

Crossing

She carelessly tosses a few strands of hair that sauntered to her forehead, and crumples it up a bit above the nape of her neck.
There she is, in her jeans and sports tee, the predictable tick of the maker on her bosom, her black cotton jumper undone.
And the dangling earrings. What are they, he thinks.
Indian? Turkish?
Some influence from the Far East, for sure.
Billy looks on at her, the sunlight touching her face at right angles. The wrinkles done up neatly. Who would even know they exist?
She has this bohemian, even a good witch kind of charm about her. The kind that stands out in a crowd, that makes you look on without knowing why.
Maybe it is beauty of a certain kind, in another culture.
He walks by her sometimes. When she waters the Germaniums in the garden. Or lies with a book, squinting in the sun.
He somehow just wanted to be an observer today, looking closer at something that has always been there, just to unravel some hidden puzzle, some curious answer that finds its way to you with a smile.

Through all those little tasks that fill your day, you seamlessly take your fragrance along with you, creating magic and little pieces of sunshine along the way.
He had this gift, Billy.
He could tell that from what he sees now, people would have been younger years ago.
Many men would have happily wanted to spend the rest of their lives in her arms. That even say twenty-five years ago, she must have had that wistful sadness, that longing for something one can’t quite put ones finger on, in her eyes.
She looks the other way.
The lights change. He walks on.

10 Comments:

At Saturday, 25 February, 2006, Blogger Mr. J said...

Did they live happily ever after??

 
At Sunday, 26 February, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

happiness and contentment is not the natural state of man, meaning most of us are sad and regretful more often than we are full of contentment. so why is it that we all don't project a wistful beauty that would snag attention?

i think the point here is not the wistful woman, but the point is Billy, and his perception, his ablility to see things "in a certain light."

"th lights change. he walks on." your last lines are such masterpieces, prat!

 
At Sunday, 26 February, 2006, Blogger ... said...

I can't help but wonder what effect Billy had on her.

A strange and beaufiful intersection of two ideals.

 
At Sunday, 26 February, 2006, Blogger Stormy Zephyr said...

Ah, sing the blue notes...sing the blue notes on a rainy day with summer stars shining on your dreams! someday Prat, you will write like a dream!!!!

 
At Tuesday, 28 February, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

what do you mean by "the predictable tick of the maker on her bosom"??? does sh have a pacemaker??

 
At Tuesday, 28 February, 2006, Blogger RamaDrama said...

I guess the "Crossing" is more enjoyable when you do the "Pausing"!Loved the moment captured!

 
At Tuesday, 28 February, 2006, Blogger SwB said...

Hello Prat. Just wanted to say you write very beautifully.

 
At Wednesday, 01 March, 2006, Blogger Arun said...

Hi Prat

WOW. i read ur blogs. Too good. Continue this gr8 work. U have a fan from an Indian working in Middle East.
Oops! no flattering.
Sorry,for my anonymous message. SHall wait for more blogs from u.

 
At Monday, 06 March, 2006, Blogger Russell CJ Duffy said...

neat writing. very much liked this bit though...

'Through all those little tasks that fill your day, you seamlessly take your fragrance along with you, creating magic and little pieces of sunshine along the way.'

lovely, lovely piece.

 
At Sunday, 12 March, 2006, Blogger Prat said...

Me & Parvathi,
To be honest, I donot have the answer the question. It is like what my friend The Bard said many years ago:

"Not from the stars do I my judgement pluck,
And yet methinks I have astronomy,
But not to tell of good or evil luck,
Of plagues, of dearths, or seasons' quality.
Nor can I fortune to brief minutes tell,
Pointing to each his thunder, rain, and wind,
Or say with princes if it shall go well..."

Parvathi, thanks for sharing your views on the question and for reading me far back.I will reply to your comments individually soon.

Isis, yes, that was roughly he idea of the post. It is always so intersting to read how you percieve things.

Ô¿Ô, will you tell me when you find out?
zephyr, someday I hope to write as easily as you do.
Pingu Boy! Listen, I was meaning to ask you if you thought it would be too weird if I wrote a post in the comments section.
Max,
we do the peeping bit off and on, don't we?
Isis, Umm I didn't mean a pace maker. I meant something more mundane. Like how sports tee's have the logo in the front.
Motorama! I just discovered you are good old Ramchi! How nice to have you around :)
Saltwater, thanks for the ego massage :D
Hi Arun,
Good to have a reader from that part of the world. I hope the oil wells are being nice to you.
C.J., thankyou. Am glad you liked the piece. See you around!

 

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