Wednesday, July 12, 2006

For Symphony, where ever you are

They say
That fairies and elves
Are not real

That
Happiness
Is short lived

That
We are all
Forms
Of energy

Also
The grass
Is green
On any side

That time
Waits for none

They didn’t say
That you
Don’t wait
Either

Time
And you
Blowing out candles

Similar
In your transience
Similar
In your tenacity
To go away.

10 Comments:

At Wednesday, 12 July, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Poignant! And beautiful! Deeply reflective..

 
At Thursday, 13 July, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Similar
In your transience
Similar
In your tenacity
To go away.

some of the most beautiful lines I have read in recent times.

To wait is the most excruciating thing to endure. In a sense all of us are waiting for death.

viper

 
At Friday, 14 July, 2006, Blogger Ekta said...

Hey wow,
Beautiful post!
And yes indeed grass is green on any side;-)!

 
At Friday, 14 July, 2006, Blogger Anand said...

Wow..very beautifully written !
And yes everything is transient..if good times are a passe..so are bad times!

 
At Sunday, 16 July, 2006, Blogger Stormy Zephyr said...

Very nice, Prat! Very gentle

 
At Sunday, 16 July, 2006, Blogger ... said...

This post was like blowing out candles. Energy into energy, then poof! Nothing. Loved the last four lines.

 
At Monday, 17 July, 2006, Blogger palamoor-poragadu said...

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At Tuesday, 18 July, 2006, Blogger Viewer said...

Beautifully placed words . Nice poem

 
At Wednesday, 06 September, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Prat,

A very beautiful poem. I was going through my old posts tonight when I saw a comment by W.B... Now I could be totally wrong in making the connection, but I just felt like dropping by & saying hi.

Hope you're doing well & taking really long strides towards a Nobel, :)

S!

 
At Wednesday, 06 September, 2006, Blogger Prat said...

Hi S!
It is nice to here from you, as always.
I am doing well (I think), invisible things just keep us going.
How are you, and which is the post that you refer to?
Wishing you the whitest pouring of eternal light...

 

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