Friday, December 15, 2006

A song for the asking

This morning
I saw a man
In the middle of a crowd

This is not
The kind of attention
That anybody would like
For themselves

This is not
The kind of place
One would choose
Given the chance
To have a seizure

I bit my lip
Muttered a prayer
To a God
Nietzsche
Says is dead

And then
Sang a song
For the asking.

5 Comments:

At Friday, 15 December, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Poor man. :(
it's all such a trivialty na.. one moment its great, next moment you never know.. its all bloody maya, as some people say...

you have a way about moving emotions, with such simple but poignant words...

 
At Friday, 15 December, 2006, Blogger asuph said...

kishore stole the two adjectives I was planning to use!

Muttered a prayer
To a God
Nietzsche
Says is dead


I chukled at those lines :)

asuph

 
At Monday, 18 December, 2006, Blogger RamaDrama said...

Jeez..hope someone called Ambulance.Pray he is single!

 
At Wednesday, 20 December, 2006, Blogger Stormy Zephyr said...

lol! Thats funny you mention Nietzche! Hope you are keeping well, Prat.

 
At Thursday, 21 December, 2006, Blogger Eroteme said...

I enjoyed this and the way you composed it. Very well written...

 

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